The Magical Forest
Andy Wilson is a teenager that has a magical ability. He lives in U.S.A. He recruitment the boys secretly like him and made a circle named 'Mr. shaman'. The circle's member was only four people, Eric, Andy, Steve and John.
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The bell rang. Andy Wilson walked to the telephone.
"Hello"
[Hey! Andy!]
"This is not Andy. Bye~"
[Wait! I will go to your house with everybody! Bye sir!]
"Hey! Eric!"
Few minutes later, the house bell rang.
"I'm coming!"
"Andy! we decided where to go to trip." Eric shouted.
"Where should I go?" Andy asked to Eric.
"Venus."
"Venus? What is venus?"
"It's the island that is in the East."
"Oh.. Is it beautiful?"
"yes! There are a lot of roses that you like, and..."
"And what?"
"There are a lot of monsters"
"Roar!" Steve jump to Andy and he pushed Andy.
"Is that real?" Andy hit steve's head carefully.
"Ha! It is just kidding." Eric said with taking out his tongue.
"Okay. Let's go."
"Yeah!" Everybody shouted at the same time.
"Let's use the teleport. I hate the airplane." John said shadily..
"I will never use teleport. Did you forgot? When we use the teleport, all the world will be blackout." Andy said.
"Than how about the money for trip?" John said.
"We will walk there." Steve said.
"Yeah, walking threw the cloud doesn't do anything to us." Eric said.
10 hours later
"Arrived!" John shouted.
"Is here... Venus?" Andy said.
"Yes. I saw the map very carefully." Said Steve.
"Do you think here is beautiful?" Andy asked.
"No. I do not." Eric smiled.
"Then why did you lied to me?" Andy shouted.
"It is because if we said that here is not beautiful, you will not go there." Eric said.
"See that." Andy said with scary voice.
[M]
There was an old sign that written by brown colored paint.
"What was that?" John asked to his friends.
"I didn't see anything" Andy said.
"Me either." Eric and Steve said.
"It's strange. I saw something."
"I think you are tired." Steve said.
"I think so too. Let's sleep."
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[Wait! I will go to your house with everybody! Bye sir!]
"Hey! Eric!"
Few minutes later, the house bell rang.
"I'm coming!"
"Andy! we decided where to go to trip." Eric shouted.
"Where should I go?" Andy asked to Eric.
"Venus."
"Venus? What is venus?"
"It's the island that is in the East."
"Oh.. Is it beautiful?"
"yes! There are a lot of roses that you like, and..."
"And what?"
"There are a lot of monsters"
"Roar!" Steve jump to Andy and he pushed Andy.
"Is that real?" Andy hit steve's head carefully.
"Ha! It is just kidding." Eric said with taking out his tongue.
"Okay. Let's go."
"Yeah!" Everybody shouted at the same time.
"Let's use the teleport. I hate the airplane." John said shadily..
"I will never use teleport. Did you forgot? When we use the teleport, all the world will be blackout." Andy said.
"Than how about the money for trip?" John said.
"We will walk there." Steve said.
"Yeah, walking threw the cloud doesn't do anything to us." Eric said.
10 hours later
"Arrived!" John shouted.
"Is here... Venus?" Andy said.
"Yes. I saw the map very carefully." Said Steve.
"Do you think here is beautiful?" Andy asked.
"No. I do not." Eric smiled.
"Then why did you lied to me?" Andy shouted.
"It is because if we said that here is not beautiful, you will not go there." Eric said.
"See that." Andy said with scary voice.
[M]
There was an old sign that written by brown colored paint.
"What was that?" John asked to his friends.
"I didn't see anything" Andy said.
"Me either." Eric and Steve said.
"It's strange. I saw something."
"I think you are tired." Steve said.
"I think so too. Let's sleep."
click here for ending #1
click here for ending #2
click here for ending #3
Good job.
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DeleteYour writing is pretty long^*^ It's longer than mine....kk Good job;P
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DeleteThanks for sharing your creative story on your blog Lydia, the story is a bit confusing and the ending 2 and 3 are the same except the end and could have been used as part of your main story. I can see you made a good effort of writing the Magical Forest. You can use photos, pictures and videos to illustrate your story - try it next time.
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